...That was fantastic. Perhaps I could respond in turn, with a poem I wrote sometime last year (before I wrote this song):
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The White Rose
-A poem-

I take a walk
on a winter's day
in solemn silence

And in pathways
I have walked before
my eyes remain

Slowly flowing
Up
Until

I reach a place
I have been before
if only to observe

Alone

What wonders still
this world retains
from this silent hill

As I arrive
dying golden colours
are painted on the snow

Faintly glowing
gold and
fading

Never have I known
the Sky
I fold my wings

Again

From feathered face
my keen and
understanding eye

A Tear shines
Golden
Falling

But something there
is different than
before

For there
in White
I find

A Rose

The world falls silent
I observe
in darkness

A Tear
Golden on petals
of White

Shining

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Thank you for your response, RedKing14ca. Definitely made me step back for a bit there. You're good with words, I have to say.
...And I'm genuinely delighted to have recieved such a beautiful poem from you. I don't get that very often. Thank you for sharing that.

Don't worry, I won't judge you. Thanks for the comment!

I need better equipment, that's for sure. Thanks for your frantic, energetic support lol.

lol...calm down, mate. I've never taken formal lessons. (Well ok for a semester in 5th grade.)

And the high quality version is coming, is coming. I'm begging my friends to help me out and lend me a piano with a decent recording device...oh, it'll come, friends I certainly hope so!

And thanks so much for your review! Means a lot. :-)