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It wasl hilarious, i guess eveyone else simply cannot understand the audio at the beginning... that was gross tho when he cuts it off... but still rather funny...

I think everyone else was expecting/hoping for a porno ending...

damn underage males all up in this place!

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"I cried... Then wrote:"

submission: .|Song For The Lonely Heart|.

date: September 28, 2009

how can i write what is in my heart

a will so contrite, an unknowing part

in a game so believed to be inevitably true

will find its place swimming in an ocean of blue

one day when we met i found your tears flowing

and brought you my life in this vessel unknowing

and i waned and i pained through the labors of entailed

and saw the great glories I never would have unveiled

and where did I go at the end of this earth

when nothing and no one could ever rebirth

the love that I've known so breathtakingly shown

by that which I loved who showed me my home

to the great grass gardens in my home made above

I wait now beside Him for the woman I love.

September 28, 2009

Author's Response:

...That was fantastic. Perhaps I could respond in turn, with a poem I wrote sometime last year (before I wrote this song):
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The White Rose
-A poem-

I take a walk
on a winter's day
in solemn silence

And in pathways
I have walked before
my eyes remain

Slowly flowing
Up
Until

I reach a place
I have been before
if only to observe

Alone

What wonders still
this world retains
from this silent hill

As I arrive
dying golden colours
are painted on the snow

Faintly glowing
gold and
fading

Never have I known
the Sky
I fold my wings

Again

From feathered face
my keen and
understanding eye

A Tear shines
Golden
Falling

But something there
is different than
before

For there
in White
I find

A Rose

The world falls silent
I observe
in darkness

A Tear
Golden on petals
of White

Shining

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Thank you for your response, RedKing14ca. Definitely made me step back for a bit there. You're good with words, I have to say.
...And I'm genuinely delighted to have recieved such a beautiful poem from you. I don't get that very often. Thank you for sharing that.